Trouble with Ellery (II)

mmmmmmm, its still not right.

The few people who have seen it say its recognisable but I'm not happy with it, its the eyes and the forehead but mainly the eyes, I've redone the eyes eight times now and this is the best effort and I didn't actually draw the eyes at all, just put a blob of cream in there to describe the whites.

Its still not right though.

But I've gone as far as I want to with this now, it happens sometimes, maybe I'll do it again soon, this time I'll start with the face first though !